LinkedIn Sales Message Writer
A LinkedIn connection request that fits the character limit and never pitches too soon, plus a follow-up DM for once they accept. Built for LinkedIn's own conventions, not a generic cold email.
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What it produces
Real output from this tool, not a mock-up.
What went in
- Who you are targeting, and why
- Heads of quality at UK food manufacturers. Specifically Dev Raman, Quality Manager at Pennine Foods, 120 staff, BRC certified.
- A specific reason to connect
- He commented in the Food Manufacturing UK group about BRC audit prep being mostly retyping, saying 'this is 90% of my February'.
- Goal
- Start a conversation
Connection request
Saw your comment in the Food Manufacturing UK group about BRC prep eating up your February with retyping. That's a familiar complaint from quality managers this time of year. Would be good to connect with you.
Follow-up DM once accepted
That comment about BRC prep being 90% retyping stuck with me, it's such a common bottleneck for quality teams every February. I work with quality managers at food manufacturers on cutting that admin load down. Is the retyping mostly pulling data from paper records into the audit docs, or something else?
When to use it
Use this for approaching someone on LinkedIn specifically, where the constraints are different from email. You get a connection request that fits the character limit and does not pitch, plus the follow-up DM to send once they accept, because those are two separate jobs and pitching in the request is what gets ignored.